Hello everyone, I recently created a short stickman animation and wanted to share it here. It’s a 58-second superhero story with a simple setup, comedy, and a quick ending. My goal was to see whether I could keep a story interesting while working with a very short runtime. I’m experimenting with 2D animation and trying different ways to improve storytelling, timing, and character movement.
Here is the video: https://youtube.com/shorts/T3xl1-a0uwA I’d really like to know what you think. If you watched it, what would you improve first — the animation, storytelling, voice/audio, pacing, or ending? Honest feedback is welcome.
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